Brooklynn(:

Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Be honest and tell me what you think.

Unesxpected
When you came into my world you saved it from crashing.
The way you treat me is like a childs touch.
Your words are like music to my soul.
Your love is like the blood in my veins.
You're mine forever to have and to hold.
Yes, I must admit this love was unexpected.
But I'm glad I found you.
-Brooklynn-
Tell mw what you guys think. Yes I'm a poet, but not a good one. I'll put more of my amiture things on here.
-Xoxo
Brooklynn.

2 comments:

  1. All poetry is good Brookie, as long as it comes from the ♥.
    :)
    xx,
    ~Abby~

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  2. That was really good! I don't think you're bad at all, I think you're really good.

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